Looking the same to her treated eyes, Reena took the untreated umbrella by mistake.
From “Give Away” by Lucia Damacela
Contributors: Lucía Damacela, Jeff Fleischer, Peter Grandbois, David Hammond, Katherine Hil, Julia Porter Howe, Jennifer Lee, Lenny Levine, Charlie Monte Verde
I love the mystery awakened by Lucia Damacela’s “Give Away.”
It leaves me wanting more but knowing it would be dangerous because of all that is implied within the story.
My comment was regarding Kathy Hill’s piece entitled “Happy Birthday”
Hoping to see more from Katherine Hill, there’s something about her writing that hooks you.
Good job Kathy. Keep up the good work on writing.
Way to go Katherine Hill…great play on words and makes me want more. Keep up the great work.
“Give Away” by Lucia Damacela is a powerful micro-fiction; the choosen words are admirable.
I love the child’s perspective in “Retribution.” “No Good Deed Goes Unpunished” is surprising and fun, and it comes to a neat and satisfying conclusion.
I enjoyed “Happy Birthday” by Katherine Hill. Solid imagery. It grabbed my attention and kept it. Would like to see more of that.
I really liked “Happy Birthday.” Nice blend of childlike wonder and grim imagery.
I loved Katherine Hill’s story “Happy Birthday.” It’s amazing to see how much she has grown as a writer. “Happy Bithday” also gave me chills, and I admired the grimness of it. Great job Kathy!